My First Ten Verbs
Brett over at A Bucket of Love tagged me with this meme, which is a writing exercise to list the first ten verbs in your script. It's to see if your script is too passive.
I'm a little afraid, but I'm opening up the still-in-progress rewrite of my supernatural thriller. Here we go...
Interesting. It is a fairly quiet scene though, the main character sitting at a table, taking some pills.
Contrast this with the earlier draft:
Different. And sort of revealing, in a yeah-it-was-more-active, but-now-it's-gone way.